From 1591feb2076634b30febab70e2839a0ac374e2e6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: sawinglogz <3787776-sawinglogz@users.noreply.gitlab.com>
Date: Thu, 2 Apr 2020 21:15:13 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Reapply Arie's many grammatical fixes to the release notes.

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 1 file changed, 49 insertions(+), 51 deletions(-)
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index e646855c..0e7100d4 100644
--- a/oscar/docs/release_notes.html
+++ b/oscar/docs/release_notes.html
@@ -1,9 +1,8 @@
 ﻿<!DOCTYPE html>
 <html>
-<body>
+<body style="font-family: Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;">
 
-<p>
-<b>Changes and fixes in OSCAR v1.1.0-BETA?</b>
+<b>Changes and fixes in OSCAR v1.1.0-BETA-?</b>
 <ul>
 <li>[fix] AHI and Usage bars in overview graphs now show the correct height when oximetry usage is significantly longer than CPAP usage.
 <li>[fix] Improved import of Philips Respironics settings. In particular:
@@ -23,8 +22,8 @@
 <li>Portions of OSCAR are &copy; 2019-2020 by The OSCAR Team</li>
 <li>[new] Add preliminary support for Viatom/Wellue pulse oximeters</li>
 <li>[new] Add support for Dreem hypnograms</li>
-<li>[new] Extensive re-organization of the ResMed loader to facilitate understanding and future improvements</li>
-<li>[new] Additional Philips Respironics machines tested and fully supported:
+<li>[new] Extensive reorganization of the ResMed loader to facilitate understanding and future improvements</li>
+<li>[new] Additional Philips Respironics devices tested and fully supported:
   <ul>
   <li>DreamStation Auto CPAP (500X130)</li>
   </ul></li>
@@ -36,7 +35,7 @@
 <li>[fix] The Philips Respironics loader now respects the "ignore old sessions" preference</li>
 <li>[fix] Improved handling of discontinuous Philips Respironics data</li>
 <li>[fix] Improved import of Philips Respironics flex and humidification settings</li>
-<li>[fix] Fix incorrect display of tube diameter on some Philips Respironics machines</li>
+<li>[fix] Fix incorrect display of tube diameter on some Philips Respironics devices</li>
 <li>[fix] Fix missing "Bi-Flex" label for bi-level DreamStations</li>
 <li>[fix] Fix crashes in ZEO loader</li>
 <li>[fix] Fix several memory leaks</li>
@@ -47,7 +46,7 @@
 <ul>
 <li>Portions of OSCAR are &copy; 2019 by The OSCAR Team</li>
 <li>[new] Extensive overhaul of the Philips Respironics System One importer, resolving all previously reported issues.</li>
-<li>[new] The following Philips Respironics machines are now tested and fully supported:
+<li>[new] The following Philips Respironics devices are now tested and fully supported:
 <ul>
 <li>REMstar Plus (System One) (251P),</li>
 <li>REMstar Pro (System One) (450P, 451P),</li>
@@ -74,20 +73,20 @@
 <li>DreamStation BiPAP S/T 30 with AAM (1030X150),</li>
 <li>DreamStation BiPAP AVAPS 30 (1130X110),</li>
 <li>DreamStation BiPAP AVAPS 30 AE (1131X150)</li>
-<li>Note: The settings for PC, S, and S/T modes are still displayed incorrectly.</li>
+<li><i>Note: The settings for PC, S, and S/T modes are still displayed incorrectly.</i></li>
 </ul></li>
 <li>[new] Update translation files and add new languages</li>
-<li>[new] Allow user to reset graph order on Daily page to Standard or Advanced order (often useful for AVS and AVAPS CPAP modes)</li>
-<li>[new] Add preference setting to include serial number on machine settings list</li>
+<li>[new] Allow user to reset graph order on the Daily page to Standard (for CPAP and APAP) or Advanced order (for ASV and AVAPS modes)</li>
+<li>[new] Add preference setting to include the serial number on machine settings list</li>
 <li>[fix] Place date, time, and Oscar version information in report footers</li>
-<li>[fix] Update identification of ResMed S9 machines on Welcome page</li>
-<li>[fix] Correct formatting of event number in Daily Events tab</li>
-<li>[fix] Correct timezone offset for somnopose imports</li>
-<li>[fix] Show a progress bar when setting Overview range to a large number of days</li>
-<li>[fix] Make session bars on Daily page clearer by using a better color</li>
-<li>[fix] Improve list of machines on Statistics page</li>
+<li>[fix] Update identification of ResMed S9 devices on the Welcome page</li>
+<li>[fix] Correct formatting of event number in the Daily Events tab</li>
+<li>[fix] Correct timezone offset for SomnoPose imports</li>
+<li>[fix] Show a progress bar when setting the Overview range to a large number of days</li>
+<li>[fix] Make session bars on the Daily page clearer by using a better color</li>
+<li>[fix] Improve list of devices on the Statistics page</li>
 <li>[fix] Report Pressure when IPAP data is missing</li>
-<li>[fix] Implement Refresh button on Profile page</li>
+<li>[fix] Implement Refresh button on the Profile page</li>
 </ul>
 </p>
 
@@ -100,79 +99,79 @@
 <li>[fix] Overview chart problems when both CPAP and Oximetry data were included fixed</li>
 <li>[fix] Translations updated for all languages.  Spanish (Mexico) and Norwegian languages added</li>
 <li>[fix] All languages now available on Mac</li>
-<li>[fix] Date bar on bottom of Daily graph now in local time when no line cursor displayed, and formatting improved</li>
-<li>[fix] 100% zoom now works on overview page</li>
+<li>[fix] Date bar on the bottom of the Daily graph now in the local time when no line cursor displayed, and formatting improved</li>
+<li>[fix] 100% zoom now works on the Overview page</li>
 <li>[fix] View/Reset Graphs now enables all graphs and all event flags</li>
 <li>[fix] Calendar date now formatted per national settings</li>
-<li>[fix] Toggle buttons on Daily page's session list and event and chart pulldowns changed to checkboxes</li>
+<li>[fix] Toggle buttons on the Daily page's session list and event and chart pulldowns changed to checkboxes</li>
 </ul>
 </p>
 
 <p>
 <b>Changes and fixes in OSCAR v1.1.0-testing-3</b>
-<br/><b>NOTE: Translations have NOT yet been updated for these changes</b>
+<i>NOTE: Translations have NOT yet been updated for these changes</i>
 <ul>
 <li>Portions of OSCAR are &copy; 2019 by The OSCAR Team</li>
 <li>[new] DreamStation BiPAP S/T and AVAPS ventilators (1030X and 1130X) are now supported. The settings aren't yet displayed correctly, but therapy events and graphs should now display properly.</li>
 <li>[new] View/Reset Graphs organizes graphs in their original order</li>
 <li>[fix] Format dates for the national region as reported by the operating system</li>
-<li>[fix] Improve progress bar for statistics cache update</li>
-<li>[fix] Correct calculations of seven-day AHI and leak rate on Welcome page</li>
-<li>[fix] Clarify AHI and hours labels on Records tab of right sidebar</li>
+<li>[fix] Improve progress bar for the Statistics cache update</li>
+<li>[fix] Correct calculations of seven-day AHI and leak rate on the Welcome page</li>
+<li>[fix] Clarify AHI and hours labels on Records tab of the right sidebar</li>
 <li>[fix] Correct import error resulting in invalid elapsed times and impossibly high AHI values</li>
 </ul>
 </p>
 
 <p>
 <b>Changes and fixes in OSCAR v1.1.0-testing-2</b>
-<br/><b>NOTE: Translations have NOT yet been updated for these changes</b>
+<i>NOTE: Translations have NOT yet been updated for these changes</i>
 <ul>
 <li>Portions of OSCAR are &copy; 2019 by The OSCAR Team</li>
-<li>[new] Show progress bar when Statistics page has to refresh cache with more than 180 days in it</li>
+<li>[new] Show progress bar when the Statistics page has to refresh the cache with more than 180 days in it</li>
 <li>[new] Romanian language is supported</li>
-<li>[fix] Show commit id in title bar for testing and beta builds</li>
+<li>[fix] Show commit id in the title bar for testing and beta builds</li>
 <li>[fix] Show BMI label and calculated value only when both weight and height are non-zero</li>
 <li>[fix] Improve BMI display in Daily/Notes</li>
 <li>[fix] Correct profile dialog to show height is measured in cm, not meters, when units system is metric</li>
-<li>[fix] Always show event indices on Daily page even when some event flags are turned off</li>
+<li>[fix] Always show event indices on the Daily page even when some event flags are turned off</li>
 </ul>
 </p>
 
 <p>
 <b>Changes and fixes in OSCAR v1.1.0-testing-1</b>
-<br/><b>NOTE: Translations have NOT yet been updated for these changes</b>
+<i>NOTE: Translations have NOT yet been updated for these changes</i>
 <ul>
 <li>Portions of OSCAR are &copy; 2019 by The OSCAR Team</li>
-<li>[new] Offer migration if non-default directory is selected on first use</li>
-<li>[new] Hold SHIFT key down when starting OSCAR to use Software Graphics Engine</li>
+<li>[new] Offer migration if a non-default directory is selected on first use</li>
+<li>[new] Hold the SHIFT key down when starting OSCAR to use Software Graphics Engine</li>
 <li>[new] Support for DreamStation BiPAP autoSV (900X) should now be complete</li>
-<li>[new] Improved Dreamstation support</li>
+<li>[new] Improved DreamStation support</li>
 <li>[new] Improve oximeter import for CM550D+</li>
 <li>[new] Disable Dark Mode on Mac</li>
-<li>[new] Show hours/day constituting compliance on Statistics page</li>
-<li>[new] Better order of graphs on Daily page for newly created profiles</li>
+<li>[new] Show hours/day constituting compliance on the Statistics page</li>
+<li>[new] Better order of graphs on the Daily page for newly created profiles</li>
 <li>[new] Help/System Information shows info about OSCAR, OS, and data location</li>
 <li>[new] Move pie chart option from Preferences dialog to View menu</li>
 <li>[new] Hide pie chart when capturing screen</li>
-<li>[new] --datadir option now allows fully qualified name on Windows</li>
+<li>[new] The --datadir option now allows fully qualified name on Windows</li>
 <li>[fix] Fix some oximeter import issues</li>
-<li>[fix] Use local time rather than UTC time in oximeter import</li>
+<li>[fix] Use local time rather than UTC in oximeter import</li>
 <li>[fix] Improve screen capture on Mac</li>
 <li>[fix] Fix crashes in CPAP data rebuild, purging of a machine</li>
-<li>[fix] Prevent crash if taking screen shot before profile is opened</li>
+<li>[fix] Prevent crash if taking a screenshot before a profile is opened</li>
 <li>[fix] Increase mask vent ranges</li>
 <li>[fix] Correct session bar if no sessions are present</li>
-<li>[fix] Correct months shown on Statistics page monthly view</li>
-<li>[fix] Compute compliance on Statistics page based on total days not days used</li>
-<li>[fix] Paginate statistics report when printing</li>
+<li>[fix] Correct months shown on the Statistics page monthly view</li>
+<li>[fix] Compute compliance on the Statistics page based on total days, not days used</li>
+<li>[fix] Paginate the Statistics report when printing</li>
 <li>[fix] Fix "phantom date" (12/31/1969) on some ResMed imports</li>
 <li>[fix] Default font substituted when a specified font is not valid</li>
 <li>[fix] Change Preferences measurement units choice to Metric or English</li>
 <li>[fix] Improve display of cmH2O numbers</li>
 <li>[fix] Show graphics engine in title bar correctly</li>
-<li>[fix] Adjust size of Preferences dialog to fit smaller screens</li>
+<li>[fix] Adjust the size of the Preferences dialog to fit smaller screens</li>
 <li>[fix] Label climate control as manual or auto correctly on ResMed import</li>
-<li>[fix] Move less useful information from titlebar to Help/System Information</li>
+<li>[fix] Move less useful information from title bar to Help/System Information</li>
 <li>[fix] Change "Prescription Settings" to "Machine Settings" message</li>
 <li>[fix] Improve icons, especially smaller ones</li>
 <li>[fix] Correct Mac menu issues</li>
@@ -185,7 +184,7 @@
 <b>Changes and fixes in OSCAR v1.0.1-r-1</b>
 <ul>
 <li>Portions of OSCAR are &copy; 2019 by The OSCAR Team</li>
-<li>Disable multitasking to avoid crash during pre-loading of summaries</li>
+<li>Disable multitasking to avoid a crash during pre-loading of summaries</li>
 </ul>
 </p>
 
@@ -193,7 +192,7 @@
 <b>Changes and fixes in OSCAR v1.0.0-beta-9</b>
 <ul>
 <li>Portions of OSCAR are &copy; 2019 by The OSCAR Team</li>
-<li>Picked up latest translation files</li>
+<li>Picked up the latest translation files</li>
 <li>Changed logo to big O with text</li>
 <li>Clean up odds and ends</li>
 </ul>
@@ -203,9 +202,9 @@
 <b>Changes and fixes in OSCAR v1.0.0-beta-8</b>
 <ul>
 <li>Portions of OSCAR are &copy; 2019 by The OSCAR Team</li>
-<li>Picked up latest translation files</li>
+<li>Picked up the latest translation files</li>
 <li>Fixed filename creation for about OSCAR docs</li>
-<li>Removed display of I:E ratio from Daily page</li>
+<li>Removed display of I:E ratio from the Daily page</li>
 <li>Changed some Mac build parameters</li>
 </ul>
 </p>
@@ -215,7 +214,7 @@
 <ul>
 <li>Portions of OSCAR are &copy; 2019 by The OSCAR Team</li>
 <li>Use the Qt language files for button text</li>
-<li>Use Maximize (with frame & menu) instead of FullScreen</li>
+<li>Use "Maximize" (with frame & menu) instead of "FullScreen"</li>
 <li>Change Mac target platform to OS-X 10.12 Sierra</li>
 </ul>
 </p>
@@ -233,7 +232,7 @@
 <b>Changes and fixes in OSCAR v1.0.0-beta-5</b>
 <ul>
 <li>Portions of OSCAR are &copy; 2019 by The OSCAR Team</li>
-<li>Moved the Help Index to a user writable location</li>
+<li>Moved the Help Index to a user-writable location</li>
 <li>Clarified folder selection and Migration messages</li>
 </ul>
 </p>
@@ -251,8 +250,7 @@
 <p>
 <b>Changes and fixes in OSCAR v1.0.0-beta-3</b>
 <ul>
-<li>Portions of OSCAR are &copy; 2019 by The OSCAR Team</li>
-<li>and members of the apnea community</li>
+<li>Portions of OSCAR are &copy; 2019 by The OSCAR Team and members of the apnea community</li>
 <li>The Donation and Update features have been removed</li>
 <li>The Glossary, FAQ, and Wiki features are not yet implemented</li>
 <li>The Daily page left panel will resize to a smaller size.</li>
@@ -269,7 +267,7 @@
 <b>SleepyHead v1.1.0-unstable-0</b>
 <ul>
 <li>Released under the GNU General Public License</li>
-<li>Copyright &copy; 2011-2018 Mark Watkins<li>
+<li>Copyright &copy; 2011-2018 Mark Watkins</li>
 </ul>
 </p>
 </body>
